Ya'll were both good, but...
Blaq: Nice personals and punches. But u gotta incorporate more vocab in ur verse. I liked it tho. Keep elevatin'.
Lyric: U had the better personals. U had better vocab, but he took it slightly on punches. I liked ur verse too.
Vote: Lyric
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