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Old 01-29-04, 09:38 AM   #13
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Listening ...

Alk..
The intro was a good way to get what you had to say out without
doing it in a bitch way. n' it was a catchy intro.
Verse.. the beats aight, the sound quality is on point, dont see anything
wrong with it. Your punches are hitting well, and the personals help
you alot. The second beat.. maybe its just me but i liked the other one
better, but it doesn't matter much, its a nice switch up. Ya flow was
consistent, overall.. i like this shit

Jae...
After listenein to Alk, you tried to make a very similar intro to this..
It woulda been better if you did sum original shit. First beat wasnt
bad, seemed ya vocals were up too high. You had punches than Alk
did, i'll give you that. The second beat, i really didn't like this for a
diss track.Again, it seems like your vocals were up to high again..
It seemed you tried to go accapella like Alk once again. You fell off
ya flow at times. N' if it wasn't for the lyrics i wouldn't have been
able to understand what you were sayin.. Not bad, but not enough

v/ Alkatrakz