woah the end of this was something i didnt see coming really, like the mother and all, but it was a very nice twist. i like the way it was written between father and son, and it only being written by one person, coz for the most part poems like this you always see as a collab but i liked this. your flow from part to part was great, and i enjoyed the way you opened this, caught my attention right off the bat.

~Tera~
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check out gambling hearts or protecing a childs dream

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