actually it wasnt all that long.
anywho it seems like a raw piece, like everything was written just how it came, which isnt all that bad, but it could be shaped up some. vocab was basic, structure threw me off a bit, flow was good with the exception of a few lines here and there. the over all message was delivered pretty well and was aproached in a bit of a different way which made it interesting.

~Tera~
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check out gambling hearts or protecing a child's dream

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