i think this is a piece alot of ppl here can relate to one way or another, including me. you brought your thoughts with great force and wrote them out very well. your structure was simple but it worked very well for this. your emotions were strong and felt real, but it also helps to feel those emotions you've written because ive felt them for myself. i liked the way your approached this topic and it always held my interest because you didnt drag the topic out. me, i liked the ending mostly out of it all.

~Tera~
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