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Old 01-29-04, 05:18 PM   #9
Phoeniix
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matt took this one...dubsax came good for a first battle but try to make your bars punches/insulst instead of just stating the facts...they will hit harder that way.....
matt, nice verse you aare really elevating, had some wordplay in there that was good...and some personals. depends wordplay set up was tight but the punch kind of fell short. good verse though, you are definitely getting the hang of it.

vote: matt matt
sorry dubs
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