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Old 01-29-04, 05:21 PM   #13
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Krack

this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cuz i'll leave u cover in gore, but u couldn't win in a re-count
decent opening, kinda played but not a bad start, little bit of creativness too
like face paint for maverik's games, i'll leave ya head black-n-blue
and have ur loss count equel the number of members that r wac-in-ur-crew (his crew has 1 member- him)
not a bad punche, creative again and the personal was good, just dont explain it in ya verse next time
ur neck's shook. o n one is wat ur record will say-in-ur-next-look
cuz kid u must be gettin schooled, the way u beg-for-the-textbook (hes in this battle cuz he wants in on my crew- textbook)
wordplay was decent, personal was good just dont explain it in the punch again...good punch
i got u itchen so much its like im sendin lice-through-ur-back
u only got confidence wen u masturbate... u think u nice-wen-u-wac
lol..not bad wordplay once again, creative and a nice punch
u always contradict urself so voters will say-ur-the-worse
cuz retards r born from incest, but no one relates-to-ur-verse
decent closer to finish off ya pretty good verse


retard

you think you hard cause you started a crew/
but if i ran into you on the streets id beat the hell out of you/
bad opener, make ya punch more complex, this was plain and not a good hit..add metas and wordplay, even persoanls like kracka did
id make your momma shrill when she looks at you/
everone in can kill you cause you aint shit/
no rhyme at all, shit and you...rhyme=not there, sorry...not even a good punch if it did rhyme, make it more complex
im the retarded chosen one im the king/
i just found out that almost everone in your crew is only a minimal Age 14/
so i think you just need to get the FUCK out of R-and-B
first line didnt rhyme wit the rest, 2nd and 3rd rhyme wasnt that good, ages mean shit and ya 2nd line wasnt good cuz of that basic topic and ya third line wasnt a direct or even a punch at all, ohh and ya first wasnt a punch either

overall- kracka took this battle by a mile with his wordplay, harder hitting punches, personals and an all togethrer beter and more complex verse. Retard elevate and take a trip to Wackness Emergacny center, you need to work on alot of stuff and y ou can get help there
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