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Old 01-29-04, 05:25 PM   #15
Phoeniix
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quelude takes this. nice drop man, the closer was awesome. that was some clever shit. came strong the whole way throught with consecutive whitty punches/personals playing off his name. A you had some pretty good shit as well but youre fucked up structure really screwed you over there. it makes it hard to catch the flow and unenjoyable to read.

vote: Q