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Old 01-29-04, 06:16 PM   #14
.Iknoevel.
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G

I’m elite when like tiki barber always burstin through he seams
I’ll Staple Your Arms To Your Head And Really Make you reach for your dreams
played with the arm staple thing, i just read an FL battle the other day and i saw a line almost exactly like that
Your Learnin im the Best, you Aint Insuring Respect
I Retreave The Soul Of This New Comer Like Securin and Impurin a Guest
so-so punch...coula been better but it was ok
I Heat and Bleed Weak, You Cant Reach My Peek
Defeatin Me Is Like Fallin Asleep With UnderWear on, Its Just a Brief Dream
u rhymed dream before up in the opening and dream and peek are a bad rhyme, meh..
The Streets Is Me, Im gonna delete your speech
This battle has more shells flyin then a Public Beach
coula been better, the concept was ok but the wording sucked
Im Stompin You Out, Watch Im Merkin This Bout
I'll Put Your Eyes In Your Teeth So Next Time We Talk you'll Be Watchin Your Mouth.....
played again... i myself used a line like this when i was a newbie


B

Yo this dudes the same age as me but im more of the father figure,
Cause I spit hard like the booth on the basement, u more like big tigga
horrible opening, weak punch that just flew by him
I don’t battle gays so could u spit a little straighter, thank god its over the net ,heard ur breathe speaks louder than darth vader’s, every punch u sayin’ is fallin’ fast and makin a crater, My style u cant create it, can hear the “stoned” trait but I spit like Roberto Alomar did that umpire on home plate,....right in your face , don’t think ur cool with me cause the topic looks like we running mates, this cat is getting adobted by B. cause hes obviously strayed, ill get a 5-0 and ull be confused like a blind kid lost in a maze. I got TKO’s for gazeebo type of brothers, hes sorry for 2004 like ruben studdard, you faker than my Christmas tree, sorry bout ur girl and all the surgery, way too much on both her knees, and I aint talking bout
cant really break down ya verse... it was to hard to read and ya struct was horrible. i shortened it to what i thought was 12 lines and then started to read it and noticed that i have no clue how u wrote it, i looked for some punches when i read it but they all werent that great, take a trip to WEC


overall - G won this wit better punches and struct, even though both werent that great
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