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Old 01-29-04, 07:48 PM   #6
TheUnderRated
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Ahh, slow it up, bout ta blow it up, ganna get this hoe st8 toed up,
but imma wait after this battle ta get in that stage,
^ok multis....not a punch filler.....
dis fools stucture looks like he already blazed
tryin ta punch at me I aint fased actually amazed
^this is not a punch....weak weak....
only non nubie who writes rymes that couldn’t kill a bird caged
noticed how I be named/ gyah im down wit pac but not his song changes*,
^good attempt at wordplay but it stretched your line
its sill all good, but in my hood I wont deal well wit dis stanger*
dat is da way it is, when u in my mists, battling dis kid opps look what I jus did,
^you wrote a line of filler.......
see sum things u cant prevent, like how I be cutting this cats head off like back in da days of the tyrant/
battling me ganna see how sweet, im nice enough ta tell this faggot not ta get h.i.v.’s
im cooler than a fuckin swing in da breeze, gyeah u getting merked by pictureperfect say cheeze
^well then you tried some more multis but this verse really was bad man....elevate the whackness emergency center calls....


Losing to you is what I'm fuckin in denial-for,
You wont just get 'ripped', Ill fuckin tear out ya spinal-chord,
^been done weak opener....
Im determined this kid doesnt havva chance,
He just came too get slaughtered, and he knew it in advance,
^this Ok kinda weak simplistic rhyme but meh it was ok
Itd take a "true" artist to paint ya perfect pictures,
Now here I am comparing talent wit ya worthless scriptures,
^not bad thats enough to win you the battle...two ok punches....
Ill fuckin murder you, cause lyrically im a pshyco,
Youd be first in ratings if only RapBattles would make a typo,
^hehe i like it.....
Know that Im something youll never be 'better-then'
Compared your a retarded kid and Im a fucking VETERAN,
^well thats true and its hard....

soljia wins.....