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Old 01-29-04, 07:55 PM   #3
Verbatim
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well since this is bein slept on, i'll drop some feedback

The rhyming was realy good, really diggin the flow, that was coo, the vocab was good, i liked how you tried to rhyme every word kinda, that was pretty sweet. nice drop shouldn't be gettin slept on.....coulda been a bit longer tho, but that coo

keep it real
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