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Old 01-29-04, 08:17 PM   #14
Axiom
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Both of you have lots of filler in your verses. GaZeeBo has more filler however and that is what lost him this battle. W1CKED's set up line for each punch was filler, but his use of similies in his punches made up for the filler.

Will make my victory sort of like your crew name.....Instant!
I would say your dick-less.....But you have one in your mouth!
^Nice punches made up for the filler. GaZeeBo, you need to stop using so many multis, it makes your verse almost sing-songy and lessens the impact of your punches. W1CKED, you have some skill, try to lose some of the filler in your set up and add more punches.

Vote=W1CKED.

Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919
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