Optimus your verse had some punches that werent really hard hittin, but the thing that really makes it hard too read, and find your punches was all those ~ things. Dawg we understand Multi's you dont have to point it out. Change ya structure too, make it more like intox's, but even up the lines like : .................
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Feel me?

Intox you had some punches that were harder hittin then Opt's, plus you had better flow, structure, opener and closer. My vote goes to intox.

Vote - Intoxicated

If you could return an honest vote Id appreciate that. Thanks
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