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Old 01-29-04, 09:34 PM   #16
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gazeebo - good structure.........flow was on target throughout his drop........vocab was ok.......wordplay was nice.........i was feelin most of ya punches..........no good personals.......best line - Defeatin Me Is Like Fallin Asleep With UnderWear on, Its Just a Brief Dream......

b rantis - structure was wack.....flow was fell off drastically.......vocab was aight.......wordplay was ok.........some of ya punches were good..........ok personals........best line - would be able to put down one if i could tell when ya lines broke..cause ur rhyme scheme was so wack i didnt know when ya lines ended and started

conclusion - gazeebo takes this in strucuture, flow, wordplay, punches, and had the best line......so he gets my vote

VOTE - GAZEEBO
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