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Old 01-29-04, 10:08 PM   #15
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dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP
leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS
you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED
and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS
faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED
son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE
compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE
i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG
your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON
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structure was horrible and punches were pretty good decent personals
but yer opener was whack finished strong at the end and shit but 7/10
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your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/
ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/

scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/
winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/

this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/
momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/

this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/
you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/

i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/
wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/
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pretty whack idk yer punches and personals were horribly directed
flow was on but homie punches wins battles so you lost but 7/10
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vote/ for having better directed punches and personals
this was pretty mucha tie and shit but barely pulled this off
i would say youd be lucky to win this battle
yo doggs hit my links up in my sig and return the favor ok