Gazeebo...you had a few great lines there...Your second coupling was hard...Had a few problems with some words that don't exactly rhyme..but I spit that way in real life and I make em rhyme so I feel you. You had hard effective punches...8 out of 10 lines and I gotta go with you..

B. Rantis..I don't know what to say to you...ou need to fix your structure...or better yet..apply one. You threw punches but they were weak because they were hard to read..and they lacked stength. Too much filler....keep elevating dog.

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