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InSaNe KiLlAh
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IP:
dope collab i must say....Under left alot of thoughts and visuals....dope....nice structure also.....Rebel had better rhyming and vocab.....also with the multis....overall nice work fam...
Best Line By TheUnderRated:
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hard to explain the mental pain brought by this experience..
walk the physical terrain mental state straight up delerious..
The inside of me twisted my heart left decaying with my boy..
cause that day no longer afraid to be spraying my toy...
i'm just praying the lord will let me be saved repent...
from then on etchin intials into ever bullet my nine ever sent..
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From DaIllistReBel:
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Feelings are oozin, thoughts are confusin, certain spots have been bruised...
A lost detective with no clues, afraid to loose, body's been verbally abused...
A rebel without a cause, who often bends laws, and loves to question...
A sage knight, young but experienced has learned many of life's lessons...
A skitzo, one side's the gangsta who raps, the other, his dad's on his grill...
Tryin to combine both, to do well in school while reflectin on this skill...
One goal, always to shine and never let this verbal light get dimmer...
People be sayin "u can't rhyme ur white!" like I've never looked in a mirror...
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Vocabulary - Rebel
Multis - Rebel
Structure - Under
Emotion - Tie
Visuals - Under
Originality - Tie
Overall - pretty dope collab from the both of u....i gotta say u had some dope concepts...nice topic...u both stuck to it and dropped good....Rebel had the better in vocabulary and flow....but Under had nicely put together verse with good visuals...like i could see what he was saying....good work
Rating
8.5/10
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