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Old 01-30-04, 12:16 AM   #7
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Well..

E.Coli.. You have elevated since last time I read one of your verses. I'm almost impressed but you still need some work. No problem though.. most of us do! But anyways.. Your verse was alright.. you had a few good concepts although your punches could have hit a little harder. Overall your verse was decent for your level of talent.

Infinite Skillz.. First time seeing you from I can remember. You still have noob in you. Don't use /s. But I won't let that affect my vote. Your punches were average.. although most were played. Never use sex lines or gay lines. Seriously dude, you seem like you have potential.. My advice is read LLL battles and get ideas.

No hate. Just a vote. Stay up both of you.

V/ e.coli

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