Where to start. Yoyoyo yo need ta fix ya structure, and people like it if ya lines rhymes. You need to actually diss your oppenent, not jus say how good you are. Theres a self-glorification cypher for that. You didn't throw any real good punches, and came with the played as hell sex shit...and no other real punches or personals in ya verse

DLE...you had a lot of filler in ya verse. Some actual puncjes tho...while they weren't great..still got you the V casue yoyoyo didn'y throw any really. The nonono and hohoho is played,. The last couple lines I liked, but they werem't really punches or nuthin. So you win with ya couple good punches.

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