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Old 01-30-04, 06:29 AM   #21
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Re:Vote.. (tho it was explained..!)

Easy decision..

Underated took this with better flow, more creative punches and originality... The fly/15 hits line was tight... the punches hit alot harder.. took every catergory..
A much more enjoyable verse.. more witty
Skandalz.. good verse.. flow was okay, multies were nice.. but it was highly unoriginal and hardly made impact.. try incorporating personals to make real good bars.. also make witty lines, rather than the same old stuff you see everywhere.. your structure was good, short sharp bars, it just needs some real good punches to go with it and your off..
Good verses from both but theres a clear winner...

Vote - The Underated

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