Good battle..

Danksta.. structure was flawed.. stretched lines messed the flow up at times.. some good similies/metas whateva.. a few nice punches.. the main thing it lacked was consistancy.. a good punch stood out amongst many weak ones really..
Tho a pretty good verse overall...
Brethan.. same style, altho slightly better flow/structure.. more creative punches really, and it was kept pretty consistant throughout the whole verse... good use of wordplay etc..
Close battle.. but for the consistancy and originality..

Vote - Brethan