Yes..this is an extremely dope piece..
Again..you blow me away completely with your vocab..just beautiful..
The idea..is very well thought out..
Many quotables are in here..flow was interestingly created..
I wish I could say more..I'll try and come back with more in-depth feedback..

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..