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Old 01-30-04, 09:29 AM   #7
Born To Kill
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Man, tight verse, Toke...

Props.

Ya just killed this with better wordplay, much wittier personals...

And harsh, funny punches.

This shit here...
Token Vs. Wise Ways?.. I thought you would've surely withdrew
You stand no chance...
..But at least you're loyal to your second crew


Was ya only weak line...pretty much crap...

Wise did nice too, but he stretched his lines some cuz he was reaching for punches...

I think he had some good concepts, but didn't word them properly, killing some of the impact.

This coulda been alot closer, but wasn't...

Just an all around more dominant verse by Token

Peace
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