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IP:
Great piece again by filed...this was greatly detailed with emotion..a lot of nicely worded imagry and it kept the reader focused on the poem. the hole aspect of this was creative..i enjoyed this stanza..
Now with the directions all drawn out
and a scenic route to stroll along
I set my feet inside your soul
and brace within me your heart's song
^^that was incredible..i loved that....keep up the good work...peace
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