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Old 01-30-04, 09:59 AM   #4
jimmy white
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Originally Posted by Holmes Jr.
Eh...this was overall not that great. Just another pointless verse about bein angry and negative shit and whatnot with no real topic...vocab was just boring, there was nothing to grab my attention, the flow was real weak and choppy at times, you need to elevate more man 4/10


thanks fo tha feedback...this verse i really didnt give a fuck if it flowed, i wrote it the message...no doubt tho
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