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Old 01-30-04, 12:10 PM   #12
VanIllabymidnite
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This was an okay piece, nice read. It seemed like some of your rhymes were a little forced. But you had good vocab, metas, and some multis which were nice. Keep it up, it seems like the potentials there.

Hit my battle up against KLO if you can, I took the time to reply to your stuff, so it'd be nice if you returned the favor.
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