ummm whats a dumb bar...i know what i dumb bell is, but whats a dumb bar...

yea anyways...
leth...good verse but i think you OD'd on the Rhode/rode/street/lane etc lines...punches were good
i didnt get the indian line

rhode. ... the shadow line was pretty nice
sides that, all your concepts seemed like flips...yea

vote Leth