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Old 01-30-04, 01:33 PM   #20
MichaelMadness
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Punches-Ss has harder hittin punches(opener was a nice touch)LI Yer ish was played at that but also worded horrible/
wordplay- Creativity was used throught the entire battle, but again LI shit was jus worded bad, so this gave saltshaka somewhat of the upperhand
flow-again because of the bad structure and wordplay use by LI it messed his flow up big time..I see signs of u being good LI jus reword yer shit better and hit harder w/ punches and personals SS nice solid flow, constinect wordplay, good punches
structure-LI Structure was wack, kinda messed up his whole shit

V/ Saltshaka

Honestly judge and vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110833
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