Hmm..first of all...joker ya lines are too long
throws off tha flow...not that much creativity
from you..you came with viagra/hard..mortal kombat
Said that you were gonna KO him
need be a lil more orignal..ya jet lines were played
Liked ya massacre line though

Carson you had a great opener..semstress was good
pretty solid verse...except tha closer..wasn't feeling that one
nice flow...good personals..although i think tha joke/joker punches
are a lil played now..but good wordplay..like ya opener for example

so

v/ Carson