thought the flow was a bit wierd in places..... but you came at the topic nicely... you opened it strongly... with some decent metaphors thru it...
Because Love don't make the World go round, it makes Your feelings Porous/
And if it did, It wouldn't be fast enough for us to Notice../
^^liked this bar..... thought you were pretty consistant in it.... yeah decent drop..... return the favour on my SS drop...