Thread: SS: Right Now
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Old 01-30-04, 02:03 PM   #5
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Flow was strong pieces. Very nice wordplay used, Nice Metaphors to start things off. One Problem that I had..Many times you forced some of your words, especially in the first two lines. It depends on what accent you use, but it came off as forced to me. Dope drop.
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