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IP:
This guys name is straight ace are you sure you’re not a joker
Coz you a joke and I’m finding it hard to keep a straight face
I’m the house in a big league Vegas casino,
You a slot machine in the outskirts of Reno
Thought it would be easy caught you by surprise
Now you can only helplessly watch your demise
I’m a naive newbie but it’s lyrically I’m wise
You’ll never beat me even if you had 20 tries
The names idle and you will never forget it
Compare yourself to me you’ll look pathetic
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not very good here,lacked direction in personals and punches
overall 5/10,this can use some multis and shit like that
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'Idle' away on AIM..jeez how original this handle..kid come on..
But creativity comes from life..so guess where his comes from..
Not showin battle record, to prevent this loss displayed its true..
..I'd hide mine..
Just to make it appear I was never in the same thread as you..
Your a anti-bliss to Rb..like reversed bible sayings..ur pure bad..
..& like a christian baby at birth..
i'll wash the shit right of your head!
Never a chance, a glimpse of hope? w/e not even close..
..You smelled victoriy?
No..that was just that shit from a bar back penetratin ur nose!
Enterin' the finisher..hence the play of enter-exit..ur ends next..
..May i give u a tip..never start audio Or poetry..
& just as a whole..quit text!
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structure was iffy but i liked yer creativity it was good
well you hit harder so 7/10 and yea thats ok
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hit my sig up
vote/S.A.
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