Shit I wrote a novel and the shit got erased. Anyway
Lyrical- Your lines were a bit too stretched and that messed the floe up. You came too basic, and with too much filler. Try and be more creative with your punches, personals, and metas. Also try not to be repetative in ya words, ya used 'slugs' twice and it still sounded bad even if was only twice. Keep elevatin girl, ya get there soon. Check out Whackness Emergency Center for good battle tips and also check some battles in LLL.

D.liver.E- Good verse...kinda basic but ya did throw some good punches. Get rid of the / shit after your bars. Some good metas too, try and be more creative with ya punches, personals, and metas..some were close to bein over played. Also Stay away from the sex/gay shit as that is played to all hell.

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