FUCK THIS IS THE THIRD TIME IM WRITIN THIS SHIT. IF IT DELETES AGAIN SORRY GUYS, BUT NO VOTE!!!!!!!!!!

Ahh ok.
Lyrical- Your lines were a bit too stretched and that effected your flow. Also try and use less filler. You said 'slugs' twice which made ya verse sound very repetative even if it was only twice. Check out Whcakness Emergency Center for good battle tips. Also check out battles in LLL for structure tips and to see dope MCs. Your punches were sort of weak and basic. Try and be creative with yourt punches/personals/metas. Keep at it girl, you'll fo fine.

D.liver.E- You had a good flow and structure, jus take the / out after your bars. They unnecessary. had some good punches and metas, but also you cuold be a liitle more creative. Check out WEC and some elite battles for tips. You have the right idea tho.

Please drop a vote/opinion here guys. Gettin mad slept on! I took the time (3 times) for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540