rapid took this battle clearly...village, your structure needs some work to get it where it needs to be...take out all the //'s and make your lines more even...also try to work on more direct punches....that should help you win more...rapid, you had pretty much the only punches in the battle, some were kinda played but overall your verse was not bad...plus you had a little better personals as well...no beef, just honest votes.............

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