Ace takes this easy. Other kid was a real newb obviously. Some shit didn't rhyme, and he had some mad played concepts. idle, try and be more original with your punches and persoanls, and metas. Also your punches were kinda weak and weren't veru creative.
Ace you had a basic verse, but ya had a few nice punches and personals there. Like the line about baptizin. That was ill. My vote goes to Ace. He had a better verse, with more and harder punches, personals, and metas.

Please hit this up with an honest vote guys. People sleepin in frontlines right now. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110722 Thanks you both