Thread: Token Vs. Axe
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Old 01-30-04, 04:17 PM   #22
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Real close battle, and to be honest...
I'm a touch lost on Token's opener about Walter Wall...
I guess ya saying Axe ghostwrite's for him.
Hope so, don't wanna fuck up the personal.
But if so, isn't that the same diss as your Feeble one?
Some witty stuff, no doubt...
But against Axe's first 4 lines...
Man...
The Chuck E Cheese was kinda played, but the fact that his name is Token...
Was a nice flip.

Just think Axe came harder, funnier, and had more of it...

Token was cool, but I didn't feel he was hard enough...

The steeple line: funny, not hard.
The shave line: real creative, but no so much of a punch.
Third wheel line: again, eh...nice, but kinda soft.
Good concept, just didn't think the execution was there.

Only kinda close...

Peace

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