The verses are due ASAP ... so let me give the voters a head start ....
Decapitate you get a couple votes & then rip out your heart ....
the head start kind played, but it was aight
The people like violence .... not old grumpy men who stay whinin ...
So for a few more votes I eat you like lambs that needed the silence
nope
I feel like I'm above slopes ... battlin you ...... your only sub dope
Fuck polls I tug ropes, you'll flow clean if you eat this bar of Dove soap
nope...I've heard and read bar/soap lines much iller
See that ... half a verse ... to surpass the worst ...show you paths to birth
BTK laughs at first, but when he's gotta murder himself is where at last it hurts
multis were aight, but besides that, it was blah
You've got so many losses that the wins dont even matter any more
I leave your body parts ripped apart different places scattered from War
lmao at the first line...that should have been the closer cause your last like was wack
The line befor the closer was ill, the rest was either not good or played or both
Technician scared me, kid looks like he was born on Halloween...
Then I checked his profile, no wonder this became an ugly scene!
ok
Cuz he was, or at least claims to be, maybe he wants ta be gothic...
But they're already depressed enough, so gothics are sayin stop it!
nah
I'm not used ta dealing with stalkers, so Tech's givin me tha creeps...
Kid's tryin so hard ta be like Born, he's even sayin he's older than me.
nope
He prefers cold winters, on account of his brain being so whack...
Cuz everytime he's faced with a heat wave, Tech always waves back.
lol, that was funny
Gotta mention he's a wimp, joined a snychronized swimming crew...
But when one of his boys drowned, he thought he should too.
ok
Kid gets harrassed sexually at work, his emotions are getting toyed...
Cept he can't sue anyone over it, cuz his dumbass is self-employed.
Lmao!...this was an ill closer
your verse had a few ok punched and a couple funny ones. It was a pretty decent verse
Vote: Born 2 Kill, for better punches and more creativity
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-W1