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Old 01-30-04, 04:56 PM   #12
Lethargic
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From: Campbellsville
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Okay, I read this battle 3 times. Just cause I like both of you and wanted to get a thorough view of the verses.

COM - Your Smilies and Face a man line's were nice. After that beginning, you really fell off. You're TR coming better than him line was nice, but it's been done. So..

JNB aka KoN - Foxworthy/No WiTs were nice. Then you likewise fell off. 4 Granite/Face the Music Lines were like COM's TR line.

The deciding factor in this battle was who threw more punches...and came less played in the end. YOu both started off nice...then just plummeted. At first, I gave it to COM, but after a reread or two, it seemed like KoN had the more consistent/less played verse. The only reason I decided on COM after the first time I read it was cuz of KoN's weak closer. Opening/Closer are key points to a verse.

Vote ~ KoN