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Old 01-30-04, 05:04 PM   #13
Malice
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From: Nati
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Vote:~~~~Gazeebo

This battle was pretty onesided!

Killa, i just really didnt like ur structure... Clean it up a lil bit so a reader can understand it. Other than that i liked most of ur rhymes, some were pretty simple, but thats ok, you came average.

Gazeebo, i loved tha whole verse, from bar 1 to bar 10. The intro was great, the body was good, an the closer is where u def. put him on lock. Nice job both of you but once again my vote goes to Gazeebo!!

MAILCE
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