Banned: Compromised Account
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V/ Freeman
Freeman was content during this battle...he came wit some good punches and some funny ones...his wordplay was wasnt bad either. his verse was far from basic...he kept solid wit his struct and flowed through out the whole entire verse...he had a good amount of creativity and it added to make his verse better...your personals were decent and some good but if you made them more complex, well ya verse would be much better as well.
Remixx, you didnt come as well as i expected in this battle, some of your lines were ok but your rhyme scheme and what words you rhymed threw it off....try to improve on that since it is important. your punches were decent, but alot just made u look good and didnt really connect well..they just stated things and didnt hit em...try to focus on dissing him, just write out lines and dont make em rhyme, and then when u got your punches and ideas written down you can go back and edit them and re-word so that they rhyme...your structure was alright but you could drop the / at the end of the line and even out ya lines too...
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