carson - good structure.......flow was on target........vocab was pretty good.......multis were tight.......wordplay was nice.........all of ya punches hit hard........good personals.......best bar: U get the jist...You were wrong in askin for Vet's Only...
Your a great father to your record, never leavin your L's lonely
telekinetic - structure was ok, lines a lil stretched........vocab was ok........some of the multis were good..........wordplay was good at times.........some of the punches landed.......ok personals........best bar: Your lyrical state of mind is worthless your skills under water an wont surface
While im breakin news your breakin bread.............. in a skill dead joker circus
conclusion - carson came wit harder punches, better flow, and had the best line in the battle so he gets my vote......
VOTE - CARSONJETX2
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019
thanx.......