Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
cool
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
blah
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
eeeh
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
ok

------------Finisher----------------------------------
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
(put down text)
the lay-text has been played for a long time

I dont like the attempted wordplays like the "loss", "chicklets", and "battery" and the other lines like that. Also the dashes in your verse emply that the reader doesn't know a multi when he sees one. Your readers arn't that stupid. Besides that, the verse could have been better, but it was ok

Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
nope...rhyme better
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
note
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
not a punche, and the rhymes are blah
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
nope, and the soul of the shoe is played
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
nope

Your verse just lacked hard enough punches and wittiness

V/ Antonio for connecting a couple punches, better multis and more creativity.

Please return the favor on my battle with GaZeebo

-W1

__________________
H e n c e F o r w a r d