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Old 01-30-04, 02:21 PM   #30
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
1st line is no good, useless multis and no punch...second lime is nice..good meta
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
played
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
dun rhyme..but ok punches
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
kinda played but ok
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U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
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dope


Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
1st line is good...second is filler
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
1st line is filler, second is ok
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
again 1st is filler..second is played
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
whack
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
decent but played

Overall Que came too weak and with too much filler in his verse. Antonio...you had a alright verse...some drop punches in there. Try and avoid multis unless they are punches/personals too..otherwise they are worthless. Vote=Antonio

PLease drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513