Carson your lines were tight and flowed together cool and constricted and not like run on sentences ya know what I mean dawg, dis actually turned out to be one of your better ones but not even close to da best but personals and punchlines were more than enough to give ya a win. Keep elevating like you always do man, right?
Telekinetic did o.k. not bad, but for a rap vet I expected much better lines depicted in high quality and made sense. Ya rhymes were a little to soft to compete with Carson at times and some were hitting a little but not really. Try reading a dictionary to expand your vocabulary and jus keep elevating higher and higher.
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Return da favors niggas and vote on my battle already.
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