Yo Telekinetic's set up explains it all^^
Do Hate and DR, So come vote,an drop ur balls!
^did you miss key that second line...???
I see the logic, This kids a "bann'd" prospect
Already lost it...
U want wins..sure,..but wit the wrong concept
^this was nice..good wordplay...ok punch
Avi^ like ur hooked on phonics...a poetic "work of not"
Everytime I look at that I see what you are not...
^this was a good punch needs to be worded better cut line...
So stop...Reminisce, your acceptin vics wit double fists
Leavin pissed, U gave it up an still poll's missed..
^heres your multi fun time....its a good punch
U get the jist...You were wrong in askin for Vet's Only...
Your a great father to your record, never leavin your L's lonely
^heheh i like this closer the best nice line.....
I battle box I expected more from Boston I leave you with more than Red Sox
Great your not your roasted, I'm leavin you servered more than KFC dead cocks
^streteched line good wordplay ok punch.....
Your styles like a plastic gun bringin no drama you're not that drastic son
Survival for a classic bum here is slight...... in fight you've outlasted none
^plastic gun is so played along with like water gun and....NO just NO
I'm the fantastic one, you're a fraud a slave man an no applauds for this cave man
Your styles basic an phony ya gay man, broke the first day like generic ray bans
^heheh i like the punch still too long and stretched...
You try to flow but speak not with your mouth put more work in ya bars grace
After this battle you beat so hard there's a black eye left on your avatars face
^good play off the avy.....long bars.....
Your lyrical state of mind is worthless your skills under water an wont surface
While im breakin news your breakin bread.............. in a skill dead joker circus
^weird wordplay....seemed forced......nope
Last place is ya purpose in life always afraid you always stayed away from the strife
Leave your text dead to life cause you an wack go together more than head and lice
^well this is an Ok closer.....for how much text you had you shoulda of thrown alot more punches...winner carson check it ya'll.....
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Telekinetic