ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin?
i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation?
^.....not a good opener ...sorry...
IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME,
im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME?
^ok ..played sex lines......meh....diffenet site style...
cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting,
ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming.
^stretched second line....ok meta4
ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU',
cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.'
^good meta4...played but whatever....first line .....blah..
i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack,
with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class.
^again second stretched line.....its fine though.....
BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS,
ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks!
^this is fine don't cap your multis....good metas...ok punches...
THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK,
you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK!
^ok closer....good wordplay....gay jokes....sad....



Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines
I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine
^hehehe nice....feedin can be helpful.....
So unless their blind… they've made the association
Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation!
^this an Ok punch.....
God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa
White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure
^thats a good connection....but an ok punch...
A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered
Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out
^don't ryhme...its a good punch...no wait its only ok
So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi
So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried…
thats a fine closer....consistency is what won this..fo dev..and structure..and veteranness of flow peace.....
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