that was very nice..i don't have any major criticisms...well paced flow, nice language...it was very nice...great actually...
here's something for your sig since i used you in mine...this is true by the way
Penskills is the textcee for the next generation...he is reviving the old time poet...his ideas will usher in a new form of hip hop and change the industry...Wit's End
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"..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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