Really Ill Piece Here Skiddz. . Topical I See. . You Did A Great Job With Descriptions And Your Imagery About The Problems Was Up To Par. . Flow Was Good, Like The Way You Structured. . The Little Pauses Between Some Rhymes Helped The Flow. . I'm Lookin' Out For More From You. . Pz.

An Abundance of, Lively, Colored Eye of Mine
Racism- We wish the world stayed Color Blind
Rainbows of Bent Light, Brightening our Day
Rainbows represent..So people Hate on Gays
^ ^ Dope. . This Is What I Meant By Imagery On The Problems. . Created The Picture Of Rainbows In My Head And Gays. . Lol. . No Hate On Gays Tho.



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