Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom - Jeez.. whats up with this.. I dropped a more explained vote than half the peeps who voted... twice now.. damn..

Ace caned the kid...

Better punches, creativity, structure etc... most catergorys.. his verse was a better read.. more original.. better vocab.. witty bars, well presented.. uh.. a tight verse..
T Nice sort the structure out, add some original witty lines and you'll be doin well..
Your verse lacked the standard that Ace had, hardly a flow, weak punches.. basic vocab.. you came behind in every catergory there is basically...
Overall a one sided battle..

Vote - Ace